S 2 P4
Now here we go for the hundredith time
The problems that made me write
Throw everything into the wind
I don't want for this to rhyme
Just trying to catch a light
Knowing now that I have sinned
Why is it that I have to fight
To get away from the past
I have to make my future right
Knowing that it comes fast
Though I'll try with my might
To make this luck last
So I'll make it right
Even though it won't be easy
and I will lose sight
of who's my real enemy
Every day and night
Because of every memory
There's no one here to help me now
Family, you did your best
But violence bleeds thorough every verse
Every hour breed it's test
Of my will every time
The choices become less
So take this chance and try
to make this work
If you fall, do not cry
It's only another loss
If you fly, Do not lie
About how you got the win
Now I am more aware
of what I've become
I don't wanna care
of what I am to some
Why do they always stare
Measuring me with a thumb
Very Very voltaire.
No longer will I fight
With my own life
Every day and Night
And feeling incomplete
I won't take knife
So let my fire ingite!
-The Hermit-
Author notes
Stanzas 1,2 4,5 are from Linkin Parks Bleed it Out
3, 6,and 7 Gave Up
Poem 4 of the Second Series
This is came out of nothing but a problem I had with a girl in seventh grade. Recently I heard from my friend that she was sorry she treated me the way she did that year. I don't believe it so that's what made the poem.
I would love to Collaborate with a member sometime in the future.
A contest entry
- *** Untitled Contest *** by Hebz.
425 points, ended September 21, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow that is great!!!! no need for working on it!! its perfect the way it is!!!! i found nothing wrong wit it! its great!! i really love this!!! its deep and very well written and flows well and yah man this is great!! u dont need to chnage nuttin around on here or adding anything to dis peom alright? this is great the way it is so man don't chnage nuthin!! its awesome man!! DO U HEAR ME! AWEEESOME!! lol sorry i wasnt screamin i am hyper lol so ya sorry. but ya anyway great poem!!
SilverWolf
HOOOOWLLL -
HOOD-WINKED!
This is great,
Need I to say more?
...Simply Me♥ -
WOW, so cool....
I noticed that there's linking park flying around this wonderful piece even be4 i read the notes...
& I tell you what, you did a great job in here, coz it's still your style & your meanings...
I love this piece alot & I hope you get over the troubles made by the girl you mentioned, I have 3 girls like this where I work, it's life you know, everyone is not always nice...
Thnx alot for entering & Best Of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba
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