reds and grays are swimming,
it's all the colors she knows...
my soul is kissing butterflys,
i feel them in my toes...
now in the rain were dancing,
without a care or dread...
the gray clouds reflect our daring game,
and turn it into loves last stead.
i turn to see her smiling,
i really dont know why...
im the one whos happy inside,
I'd wither without her, i'd die...
Suns are setting once again,
and beasts of burden smiling...
i take into me one last scent,
the scent to see her off on one last breath,
the way i know im dying...
Author notes
The scent to see her off on one last breath... That line might not fit, but i had to have it in there... it might screw up the scheme, but it puts perfection to the idea if you know what i mean...
Please tell me what you think
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All though your line may not fit in with the flow of the poem its obviously very important for you to have it in this piece of work and I think that shows how much you care for this person. The whole poem shows it and I don't think any reader could miss just how much love this write has in it.
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you are so talented. is this about last night? oh, and this is easily one of my favorites
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