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As Hips Sway - adult

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Her hips sway as slow jazz plays
to the sultry sounds of the alto sax
Dancing for no one but the TV
Back and forth she moves
with a sensual grind
thinking of you

Practicing the way her hips move
hoping to draw you into her web
Sexual innuendos add to the feel
of the music, her dance will be
just for you

Hips sway and undulate to a rhythm
that she knows only to be yours
She wants you badly deep inside
she needs you

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • infeatheredeyes
    August 8, 2007

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    Wow, what a shock to find tasteful erotica on AP.

    A real situation that has imagery that's sultry and not awkward to read. Well written and tasteful, kudos.


    • rainyday woman silver member
      August 18, 2007
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      I thank you

      Thanks for such a nice comment. Don't get me wrong but I do write the other stuff too.


  • alexandrathegreat
    August 8, 2007

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    Wow, wonderful depiction, simply floored me. Thank you for entering this, it will be in my prelim. fin. list I'm sure, makes me want to dance, plus I love the title.