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"Welcome back to the neighborhood"

 

"Welcome back to the neighborhood"

I see I've finally come back again this way,

to pick up the pieces from long ago

for me my friend, it's just another day.

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The child in me continues to reach out

yet the adulthood must walk the mile,

with unhealed scars from the potholes in life

I see it's still gonna take me awhile.

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Real happiness was buried a few years back

when a child that stole my heart,

lost his life on an early spring morning

and I try to keep myself from coming apart.

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I know he still resides within this soul

because ink flows so easy from this pen,

and time becomes available for those in need

almost as if he has become my twin.

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"Welcome back to the neighborhood"

I can see my attitude hasn't lost its shine,

to give of myself to any that ask

some how must be "Some sort of sign"

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for it helps me grow even more into the man

that you see before you here today,

welcome back to the neighborhood my friend

I'm glad you've come back to stay!

 

 

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  • moon2u
    August 9, 2007
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    WRITTEN FROM A BEAUTIFUL COMPASSIONATE HEART!
    NAMASTE'


  • tawk gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    Wow, I love these lines "The child in me continues to reach out

    yet the adulthood must walk the mile,

    with unhealed scars from the potholes in life

    and it's still gonna take awhile." Such a heartfelt write. So full of wonderful imagery and emotions

  • JustBreathe gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    Heartfelt! Picking up the pieces ... "unhealed scars" ... and the loss of a child you dearly loved. And yet within, or despite of, all these challenges, your spirit is inspired to write beautiful poetry. So indeed ... "Welcome back to the neighborhood ... I'm glad you've come back to stay!"

    Thank you so much for sharing this one. Best of luck in the contest!


  • no-longer-a-member-
    August 8, 2007
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    ===
    The child in me continues to reach out
    yet the adulthood must walk the mile,
    with unhealed scars from the potholes in life
    and it's still gonna take awhile
    ===

    so very true. An amazing write with perfect wording and flow. Nicely done, and good luck in the contest. I wish you all the best