Cashing sheets of wet water mirrors
the shards of life fall on, over and beyond my head
past the now, now the past
passing now and then.
Let the blankets cascade around me
showers of crystalised water conceal me from the world
blurr my vision so that all I see is an image of myself
Imprinted on my white washed mind
Im ready to move on, on through the curtain
where things are different and uncertain
sent down a waterfall like a letter beyond words
reflecting who I truly am, back to me.
A contest entry
- waterfalls by starwing.
600 points, ended August 24, 2007, 13 entries
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this was deep and very well thought out i believe...just one thing...is the first word crashed and crystallized is spelled with two z's...LOL....peace and harmony...desi
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