School was out, there was no going back.
All exams were over, it was the long hot summer
Of idleness and anxiety,
Limbo time.
As to the future.
What would I do?
Where would I go?
What should I do?
At long last, one one fair morning
That heart-stopping buff envelope arrived
Very official looking
With its Imperial Crown insignia.
With trembling fingers I opened the envelope.
The words did not register on first read.
Then recognition dawned.
"You have been selected for enlistment into
The Royal Air Force.
Please report for medical examination
And induction, a rail warrant is enclosed."
Joy, my first choice
And it had come up trumps.
Life was suddenly unlimitless,
And beautiful again.
All depression had vanished.
Author notes
This in fact was the long hot summer of 1936.
A contest entry
- The Best/Worst Day Of Your Life...So Far by Death of the Author.
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a fantastic presentation of poetry - where times were different and days were better, depression making way for summer smiles, let the light of life roam history as pages turn in the book.
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What a beginning to the ways of the world, the opening of youthful eyes, the harsher realities of life, stepping out on one's own, and the edge that made everyday important, too.
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Wow, such a long time ago, which shows what a dear memory you hold to your heart. I love those three last lines, they cap it off wonderfully. Thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck! x
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Well I guess that path was decided for you. I know in some European countires a year's service is mandatory. I can see how that can be the best and worst day of your life.
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You did no doubt feel as though on cloud nine on that day. And a foggy cloud laden sky there after. This explains why they draft the very young with stars in their eyes looking for adventure. Although minus the tragic episodes of war times that follow suit.I like this piece for it's storyline and unique abilities of the author in telling it so well.AP's suggestion line suggests me to offer something else the piece could include. And so I shall. More...more..more...,as this was only the begining of youthful exuberence in military obligations met.Bravo Author...grand beginings to a chapbook tale.
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