A life without love
is a life without laughter and tears
It's life without joy and warmth
a life without worry or fears
A life without love
has no purpose, it doesn't make sense
A life without love
has no risk and therefore no fulfillment
A life without love
is a life rather dull
A life without love
well that's no life at all
Author notes
Prompt: Finish the Line: A Life without Love
A contest entry
- A not so quick contest (24 hours) by poetryality.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I agree wholeheartedly; "no life at all". You have compacted the idea of a life without love into a wonderful piece of poetry. You did well with the prompt. Thank you for this entry in my contest. I wish you the best.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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Hmmm, I would think it to be sad.
Wonderful musings on this prompt and a powerful
poetic peice! Very nice.
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that's right... it is no life at all... it would just be... boring... the word choice suited the poem, so well... it's like you knew exactly what to put where and when to put it there... great write... i really enjoyed reading this piece...
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