Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

forever lost

needle falls from her arm
death has come creeping in
forever lost,
before life begins

Author notes

i chose option 5b shzoosyq

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • tawk gold member
    August 8, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This is so sad. Such a wonderful take on the prompt!!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 8, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Honey-lamb I admire you for wading through the rules to enter this contest! I like this poem very much - it is succinct and powerful.


  • MagazinesFall
    August 8, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Ooooh, very good job.
    Lately I've been enjoying prompt inspired writes, they can be so.... beautiful.
    Thanks for the entry and good luck!