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Debt, Drugs & Dole

An old friend was seen today,
Doped up on god-knows-what.
He lives in Walsall now,
In debt and on the dole,
And living it up on drugs.

His knuckles are scabbed
From when he KO’d someone who
Attacked him with a knife,
And he keeps laughing at things
Which don’t exist.

Around us, burly builders rip up old
Cobbles and replace them with pastel-
Coloured, shiny new ones.
The population increases,
But everything else remains the same
(Apart from the cobbles).

Please tell me what you think

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  • Cirion
    August 8, 2007
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    ernest observations... good describing words... I like it ..