A life without love...
How would it had been
had you not been mine?
Had I been
a singing sparrow
I would have had
lost my rhyme..
Had I been
a crimson damsel
I would have had
lost my shine..
Had I been
a croppy field
I would have had
become a ravine..
A life without Love...
Ah! How much it pangs!
Oh Love!
You are a nocturnal wine!
-Himadri(08/08/07)
A contest entry
- A not so quick contest (24 hours) by poetryality.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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Thanks Poetryality
I wish you get best of the best stuff in response , too.
warm regards,
Himadri. -
I love the visuals you lend the reader with your words. Yes! A life without love would certainly be all that you've written here. Very nice take on the prompt. Thank you for this entry. I wish you all the best.
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Thanks Angel
For your kind thoughts and remarks.
All types of criticisms and comments are always welcome. -
its interesting...i got to tell u that...life without love really does suck but sometimes i think someone is better off without it so u cant get hurt but thats not really living. Well anyways i love it
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