Stitches
Stitches
Stitches
Emotions tied together
Lies + Reality = True Lies
Pain + Suffering = Torture
Life + Death = Misreality
What am I supposed to do
In a world like this
Such cruelety dealt upon myself
and a change of scenery would be nice
Sometimes there's just nothing good to talk about
and the levels of lies are increasing
Faster
more whiter
less pitch black
How could someone be so blind
to realize this illusion is faking you out
delusional haze just blocks your way
and your arms to move it out of the way are chained to your hips
you sometimes you can't get out yet some are so successful
is it your looks-your emotions-the way you be yourself
Harsh, Harsh reality knocks you out
into the dirty waters in a way that it hurts to fall
but you think about it some more
Maybe falling into some pain won't be so bad
and this illusion will disappear sometime
(but it won't)
And if..if you try.
Maybe the ones who are counting on you won't be in vain.
-(Waiting for Morning)-
Please tell me what you think
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How could someone be so blind
to realize this illusion is faking you out
delusional haze just blocks your way
this was beautiful.. Your execution was lovely, you crafted the words like a true master...
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.
-Danneh -
" Harsh, Harsh reality knocks you out
into the dirty waters in a way that it hurts to fall
but you think about it some more
Maybe falling into some pain won't be so bad
and this illusion will disappear sometime
(but it won't)
And if..if you try.
Maybe the ones who are counting on you won't be in vain."
Hm. I love this. I love the images the bold part presents you with. I love that this makes me think about everything. Life. Who to trust. Trust. Everything. The italics are my state of mind. This could have been one of my own pieces. But I can't organize my thoughts enough...in a way it makes me laugh at how naive.. Some times illusions are easier to deal with. Sometimes not. It's all a whole contradiction.
Great job! I really love this. Sad as it makes me feel.
"Lies + Reality = True Lies
Pain + Suffering = Torture
Life + Death = Misreality"
So true.
♥Em
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Okay so the bold didn't work...
The harsh part was bold. The maybe falling part was the italics...idk why it didn't work. Probably because they took away my silver. 
Oh well. 
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Wowwww=]
Ahmazing write once again! Love this one.
"Lies + Reality = True Lies
Pain + Suffering = Torture
Life + Death = Misreality"
The best lines everrrr! For sure. Loved the power and the strength in this piece. Definitely incredible.
"And if..if you try.
Maybe the ones who are counting on you won't be in vain."
Those, too. Your poems are all great, but I reallyreallyreally loved this one. Definitely one of my favorites. And the words you use are just, wow, as usual=] haha.
Lovvvve it!
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i liked the way you did the "lies + reality = true lies" bit, that was very creative
i like the whole poem
i liked the ending as well
very beautiful
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Interesting write
shows talent.
Smile,
Judy
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