Life is a colorless
Rainbow
Without love
Drained of its
Splendid color…
Gloomy.
Without love
Life is a empty graveyard
Empty, abandoned…
Dead.
Stripping us
Of our joy,
Our happiness.
Leaving us
In wonder in
Curiosity,
Question.
A life without love
Is a life
Not worth living.
Author notes
Hope this is all right!!
In a list
A contest entry
- A not so quick contest (24 hours) by poetryality.
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Comments
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A very emotional poem is written here. I like the comparisons you've made. A great take on the prompt. Thank you for this entry and good luck!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Wow. I really like this. It's very deep. Great write and good luck in my contest!
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Wow! Good job, truly heartfelt and very deep emotion! I know this is true, but it's so hard to believe sometimes people dont actually find their soul-completing partner... ya know? Actually I guess it's kinda depressing for someone reading this from the outside, not in love. Great poem though Kelc!
-chettybu
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