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Secrets

like wasps
trapped in my mouth
are stinging to get out

i should spit them out
but swallow instead

and feel them buzz
around my stomach
til it makes me sick

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  • GypsyEyes
    November 25, 2007
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    like wasps
    trapped in my mouth
    are stinging to get out

    In truth this poem does explain how keeping secrets feel. I know I keep secrets I should tell or should have told. But in the end I still have them and I don''t know how to let them out. Great poem!
    ~Dommi