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a salmon whacks his head-
dammed river


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  • PerVirtuous
    August 16, 2007
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    cute


  • soulfultia gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    This was clever! I found myself laughing outloud...caught off guard a bit ha! Very well done! Loved it! Hope to see a shiney on this piece ~tia

    • quakietree
      August 13, 2007
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      Thanks for the comment- I love it if I make someone laugh, or cry.
      qt


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 8, 2007

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    Great imagery here Beautiful haiku you have penned good luck in the contest.