A life without love
Leaves the heart cold
With the soul empty
Making one grow old
A life without love
Has no colors that shine
The flowers don't bloom
Days just combine
A life without love
Is like tea without cream
No sugar to taste
Nothing to dream
A life without love
Makes all stand still
Nothing to hold on to
Having no will
A contest entry
- A not so quick contest (24 hours) by poetryality.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There an exceptionally smooth flow to this poem and the words lend a message to the reader. I particularly like the second stanza. A very clever written poem with no clichés, except of course the prompt line. LOL Great work poet.
Thank you for this entry and the best to you.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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This is very good, good luck to you!
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i really like this and would tend to agree to some points. the lines that stuck out to me the most are "No sugar to taste
Nothing to dream" without hopes and dreams, we don't have much
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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