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Too Alive For You

          If this is what you predicted
          when we had just begun
          Then step back for a minute
          Chances are we aren't quite done

          It's funny--what we hope for
          --What we imagine at the start
          It's funny how things change
          and how they fall apart

          I never thought I was enough
          But the opposite was true:
          You were never enough for me
          And I was too much for you

          I never thought you'd regret the way
          you chewed me up and spit me out
          You were always so damn sure
          while I was full of doubt

          Though you were sitting with me
          You were never really there
          So you never saw how much life I had...
          I had so much life to share

          You were too busy hating yourself
          You didn't even want to be free
          You never had any passion
          And I was so alive that you couldn't handle me

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  • NON-Princess
    September 2, 2007

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    I fuckin' love it! And I completely know what you're saying. Great job, sweetheart.

    How's it goin', by the way?


  • Rakerman1
    August 9, 2007

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    I like the emotion of this and the " screw you loser " attitude. As far as the bg goes....MARY!!!!

    There are more butts in there than in a used ashtray lmao.


    Beautiful writing Katy
    Roses
    Raker