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sarah, thank you.

sarah, you messed up
you can be forgiven
don't beat yourself up over it

sarah, you can stop
put down the knife.
step away, walk away

sarah, you can live
forget about the fighting
leave it all behide you

sarah, you can make it
people care about you
care about yourself

sarah, you can breathe
wipe away your tears
and face the world

sarah, you don't have to be alone
walk with him hand in hand
because he loves you

sarah, you can
you can do anything
and no one will stop you

sarah, thank you
for choosing to live
cause our life has just begun

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a letter to myself.

A contest entry

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  • Atrophya
    August 21, 2007

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    oh wow, I love this!! beautiful!! =]

    I've often talked this way to myself in my head.

    GL in the contest.


  • XInsanity-FairX
    August 8, 2007

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    this was great...made me all tingly...which is kinda weird...lol..
    i like the fact you made it into a letter for yourself...something you can read when you feel on the edge to bring you back...
    it was a moving peice...emotional and very true
    it's great that people can still bring themselves back from the edge...and see what they have by themselves...
    well done and good luck in my contest
    xxx