The song from her lips was as bloodless
As her vessel
Scales cracking and flaked
Hair as red as the veins in her eyes
Flesh as blue as the sea
Under the sea
Under the sea
They mourn for the princess
Her daydreaming of princes
Her ending un happily ever after
With a quick succession
Her story ends
Gutted and deboned
Dressed with greens and flowers
The dinner to a Prince and his court
Part of his world.
Author notes
distort a fairy tale option 3
A contest entry
- OPTIONS!!!!!!!!! AND PREWRITES!!!!!!! by Ale E.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nicely done. Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering!
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First, I am so glad you didn't pick little red riding hood :)) Great way to step out of the box there. This is a beautifully done piece. Great images and I like the sorrowful twist. Bravo.
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This is awesome! Does this mean the prince ate her? sorry that kinda confused me there, but I thought it was gruesome yet hilarious. I love how you write! great job!
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yea he did!
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RAWR! first person to do this fairy tale
&& this is awesome
I fucking love it dollface
xx
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