The woosh as the curtains close
The thunder of ovation is muffled
The heat of excitement and a rush
The touch of hands brushing hands
The smiles reflected all around
The lifting of darkness, curtains opened
The heat of their stares as they clap
The cherished memory of stepping forward
The lift in decibal at my bow
The woosh as the curtains close
The thunder of ovation is muffled
The heat of excitement and a rush
The touch of hands brushing hands
The smiles from one to the other
The charge of bodies shrouded in dark
The secret known to them alone
The kisses shared with adrenaline
The feel of wrong but so right
The woosh as the curtains close
The thunder of ovation is muffled
The heat of excitement and a rush
The touch of hands brushing hands
The knowledge that the show goes on
Author notes
4. When the curtain closes....
A contest entry
- Theater-in-the-Round by Gossamer Guile.
600 points, ended August 8, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a great piece. I love the repeated words and phrases used to emphasize the subject. Every image rings true. Great job, and thanks for entering.

