under the dark trees
a little girl watches
as the beast within you grows
so much more than words can explain
the tortued soul in her dwells
covered in bruises
-you never hit her-
but those words you screamed
made the bruises grow
the hatred and self loathing
became infinite
dont you remember the words that echo in her mind?
sweet yells of
whore-
slut-
bitch-
liar-
would you even care if she died?
or would it just be a memory in your eyes?
Author notes
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I hope this is what you wanted
A contest entry
- xX*Darkness by my hands*Xx by dying-gothic-roses.
440 points, ended August 24, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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o my god im sorry if that is how u feel about child abuse........................ a hug for u and a hugg for any abused child
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wow..this is a great poem...i like the entire poem...it fits with every word in the poem...great job...
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A wonderful poem to help people think twice upon which they do. Great work!
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the poem was very good, great imagery that it created in my mind and the picture was appropriate for the line. Good Luck! Thanks for the entry!
xX*Cheyenne*Xx* *
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