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Jealous

Im so jealous that words
still float out your pen,
with such grace and ease.
And I struggle even with this.
Poetry still has my heart,
but Im at a loss for words.
Oh, but how I wish I could write.
How I wish my words
inspired a feeling other than disgust.
Where has my inspiration gone?
Is it not enough that Im completely in Love.
Guilt is all I feel,
for he does not inspire me.
Without tragedy,
I have no words.

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Just wanting to write again. But I cant, it sucks, I know..

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  • NeoVersifierGB
    October 15, 2007

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    I heard some guy say that writing is like giving birth. Every sentence is agony lol. So even though, it might be a little difficult to let out it will come out eventually = ) I can really relate to this poem though. I like it


  • Quetzalcoatl
    August 13, 2007
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    hey, you dont have to be inspired by your relationship- hell, i rarely am and when i am they tend to be my worst works... i dunno why. write about whatever whenever- thats what poetry is sposed to be all about- if something strikes your fancy, put it in words, not for everyone else, but just because you feel like it. writing is an activity all its own, you know?

  • withoutlove13
    August 9, 2007
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    no hun this is great im sooooo glad to see you writing again its amazing!


  • MacNCheez
    August 8, 2007

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    does not suck at all. i've been in a rut writing-wise, too. just somethin ya gotta stay patient with, keep workin with, and eventually it'll come back around. just give it time. but well done with this.


  • mysticlabyrinth
    August 8, 2007
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    Stacey! this is so good! it literally made my jaw drop. And i know exactly what you mean about not being able to write unless something bad is going on. It's so nice to see your stuff on here again though. I missed reading it. Don't stop writing, even if you feel like it won't come out. It gets better.

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