Who said i
had to
live up to
standards or trends
society dictates?
When most
people in today's
society
are jacked up
and have no morals
a total "Hot Mess"!
Who said i
had to live
my life
with strife,
drama,
or chaos.
When i make
the choices wheter
or not to
live above my circumstance.
Who told you
you had the right
to judge me
with just a glance.
Without getting to
know what i'm about..
Who told you
you were in
"Charge of the World",
Looking down on
others as if they're
beneath you,
Did you forget
you're a "Hot Mess",
"Work in Progress",
Who told you
your butt dont stink?
Who said you
had to say
the first thing
that comes to mind.
Did you forget
there's a
time and place for everything.
Who said
you'd never
accomplish
or be anything?
Your life is not
determined by
others oppion.
Who said.
A contest entry
- Learning to Love the Struggle You're In by Lyrical Rain.
450 points, ended November 9, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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sorry
Sound like a letter to a past love -
Anger and indignation at the moral degeneration of man expressed with a lot of angst. Good poem, loved to read it.
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You go!I love it.You said what you had to say and said it great.Hope that you win.Never thought I'd hear someone sum it up so good but you did.You should be very proud of this piece of work.Heck I'm proud for you.
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Ok, now this....I really can feel
the passion of your pen here is awesome. WHO SAID?
great points in this piece meekia...
piff
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I like this poem... it speaks from your heart and states alot of really forward facts. Keep up the good wor
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Questions I often pose to the world myself! Very wonderful...loved the message of this write!!!
love~
Az
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I really like this. There's a lot of justifide frustration here. The emotion just rips off the page. It's also writen very well, witch really adds to the power of this piece. I like this style. Keep up the good work.
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