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I'll have the last laugh

Laugh all you want
You're just a piece of glass
And you have no soul
As you mock who I am

I stare into your depths
Peering farther at myself
Trying to figure who I am
By looking into you

But you just stare back at me
And mock who I am
How I look and how I perceive
The world around me

You laugh at my body
The lumps and bumps
The extra baggage on my hips
And my not so handsome face

CRACK!

Now you're not laughing at me anymore
You can't tell me who I need to be
I can tell myself
That I'm great the way I am

Author notes

"Breaking the mirror as it laughs at me"

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  • Lady Disdain
    August 17, 2007
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    Very nice! I like the imagery and the internal conflict. Very nicely done! Good Luck!