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last night i had a dream

I close my eyes
Pink petals are falling from a foreign tree
love is blossoming in my stomach
i am wearing nothing but the glistening summer sun
eve in the garden of eden
laying in a soft summer glow
you covered inappropriately by cherry blossoms
your eyes watch me tilt my head to the side
i look into your intriguing brown eyes.
my dearest Adam
this is heaven
complete bliss overtakes my thoughts
the faint smell of citrus reaches my nose.
god gave us this place.

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  • lust in a grenade
    August 13, 2007
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    nice very nice it flows really well it is most definetly breathtaking


  • PatheticKt
    August 9, 2007

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    wow, such a breathtaking piece this is. i love how calming and peaceful the concept is. sigh, this is really a heartwarming write, all right