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Dispirited Heart

My heart yearns for that love
The one that is like no other.
I find it troubling to feel
That is only for the angles above.

My heart yearned for one before
But he left me trampled at the door
From him to none all I want is one
To feel the  way i do so i wont be shunned

Crying hard
Feeling bared
Dying chard

Forever lost and yearning
My disperated heart contuniues burning.

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  • MovieFan
    August 24, 2007
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    wow, very emotional, powerful, and a well written poem. nice work


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    Sad yet Well Written

    In a way I can totally understand and also relate to the heart break in this poem but then again I do believe in second chances and finding someone else you just either got to wait for it or you find that someone. very well strong worded poem and well your unique little perspective on this poem is different but heart felt. very nice work and keep up the good work. time for me to crash in bed a/s/a/p nightttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt