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alone. and in control.

Saving room for saving graces
long embraces and lovers races

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  • lust in a grenade
    August 13, 2007

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    hmm interesting, i've noticed (at least with the last two poems) that you seem to be favoring shorter poems, while they are good for proving a point and shock value i think you should try and develope all of your shorter work and try and combine it into one piece, because it seems like they all have the same tone and with a li ttle workthey would flow together really well