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Cantadora

I offer this because I must.
Kept, it dies, swells & rots
bursts & hurts & dies again.

Offered up, taken in,
it marries you,
becomes the thing
that lives between

apple & tongue,
or rose & eye.
You make it new.

Re-conceived, it hurts,
still.

Yes.
But less.

Please tell me what you think

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  • raggyann
    August 8, 2007
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    this is a great style of writting
    makes me wonder too


  • Alikilie
    August 7, 2007
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    Interesting

    Makes my mind stir, not quite sure why, but it does