If only you could see,
The dwelling darkness in me.
You could touch it set it free,
Like a thousand doves flying west.
I try to see the best,
From this meaningless life.
Reaching inside my walls,
To find my damsel in distress.
As Secrets en-wrap my body parts,
Tighter thank a rope around my neck...
Choking my emotions,
Getting a tighter grip on loneliness.
I begin to struggle,
Silently screaming,
For someone to help,
This broken soul,
Cause I know now,
I can't do this on this on my own,
I'm all alone.
Trying to find the real me in the,
Dusty corners of my soul.
My one goal was to find the light,
But I just shut it all out,
In the process,
My world became dark.
When all I wanted was.
My soul to do right.
Trying to come to my senses,
With who I am,
And what I'm not.
They made me,
But in the end,
I fixed myself.
John & Dekota
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oh wow i loved this.... wonderful write i can so relate!
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awesome write.
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wow, it's a great write, I can understand you. I like it! You're very talented yourself. you write with such emotion. Wow. it's amazing!
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great poem like it lots
and nobody is every alone
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! This is SUCH a good poem - Some of the phrases in there are to be highly commended Well done.
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WOW , this is some poem, im so proud of this
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hrm thanks, i couldnt of done it without you
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