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Uncontained



                Uncontained - surging adrenaline.
soaring HEADFIRST into the wind -fearlessly-

I am alive and free.
My will cannot be stoppped.
My spirit will not be tame.

I will not sit still I will follow my own way.

The troubles don't trouble.

There is only an adventure waiting...

                    just  around  the  bend.

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    loved it, you have a great innervoice

    to write this! I go out to nature to do this and leave
    behind all my troubles..the winds help me to release it
    all and hopefully there is a river for me to explore.
    i get it fully!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen


  • Event Horizon
    August 10, 2007

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    I find this interesting...but really I wished that there was more...it ended quite quickly and I think this poem is better heard than read...either way I still like it, but I wanted more.

    "I am alive and free.
    My will cannot be stoppped.
    My spirit will not be tame."

    I loved it, but I'll say it one more time...another phrase like this would make this even greater in my opinion...Good Write!


    • bigred7330
      August 10, 2007
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      Well if it left you wanting more than I have accoplished something. The feeling of the poem is quick ..so it ended quickly...just like most good things.