I heard your voice
first time today
my heart began to smile.
I've listened to
the answering machine
I've heard it for a while!
Oh how I've longed
too hear your voice
the sweetness of your tone.
I think of you
as I lay here
for soon I will be gone!
A part of me
will die inside
I know I'll miss you so!
But to the East
to start ANEW
I soon will have to go.
We have a love
that's meant to grow
the loss will be so sad.
You're all the woman
that I've ever wished for
the Woman I've never had.
You are my sweet
sweet candy cane
the one that I adore,
There's no one else
in this whole world
THAT'LL EVER LOVE YOU MORE!
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Awww. This was so beautiful. It's also sad, but I love emotion in poems, no matter the emotion. Excellent!
Write on!
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YOU MAKE IT SEEM LIKE I'M DYING! I'M JUST LEAVING FOR A COUPLE OF YEARS, If I have accsess to a computer I will stay in touch with everyone. Glad you like the poetry on love!
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awe you should enter this in my contest baby i like it awe! it was a pleasure talking to you to I think you are on my level i mean for real real baby watch i am going to write a part 2 to this okay
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That would be fine baby. I just finished writing the one for your contest thou. Talking to you gave me inspiration Julia,
That's the title of your poem; JULIA I didn't write the numbers down but it is in your contest. I've just got to review it a couple of times.
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Awww how sweet! two thumbs up man...because if I were that girl...I'd be crying with happiness...I'm totally into the mushy stuff. And that takes the cake.
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