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the Nervous Stand.

Twas just a wink of the eye.

  The nod of his head.

Her gentle sigh.

  That silly grin.

The wave of good-by.

 

The breathless whisper.

  His heavy sigh.

She dropped her hankie.

  He gave a salute.

The look again after going by.

   

He slipped a note for the dance.

  She left her calling card.

Then came the hankie and roses.

  She though she would die.

He came to call with a nervous stand.

 

 

8-07-2007

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mac-headle

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 5, 2008

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    Beautiful littlepoem here. Such great wording and overall a very pleasing read. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 15, 2007
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    Oh this is wonderful! I can feel the butterflies in the pit of my stomach from the flirtations written here. I smiled at the third stanza. What a delightful entry. You have worked well with the prompt my friend. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the very best.


    Always Lovingly ♥

    Renee


  • JoyfulWriter
    August 7, 2007

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    Such a awesome piece of poetry! enjoyed this so very much....always do with your writes...best of luck in this contest...smiles, Terry