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Butterflies

Etheree 

 

 

Soft
flapping
butterflies
multi-colored
beautiful wonders
perfect and breathtaking
wings flutter, pockets of air
allow graceful delicate flight
captured by children and film alike
mellow, whispering delights purified

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Etheree
Background by Scarlet Ambrosia

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  • Chrissy03
    September 22, 2007
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    beautiful

  • Kim6
    August 22, 2007
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    just beautiful


  • Sweet Jane
    August 11, 2007
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    So beautiful poem


  • Taur-amandil silver member
    August 8, 2007

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    Very nice! I cannot do these kinds of poems to save my soul. I managed one once when I was in high school, it swirled, but never again. LOL!


    • pattyann4500
      August 22, 2007
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      LOL I really enjoyed the class for this. I had never heard of it before I went perusing through the classes. The instructor is really great as well.


  • jjbreunig3
    August 8, 2007
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    A delightful etheree...

    A delightful etheree; cute piece. --Joe


  • leo2
    August 8, 2007

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    This is as pretty as........ what word am I searching for?.....YOU. Your presentation here is breathtaking.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • raspberry Greeters member
    August 8, 2007

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    Aunt.. guess its high time you became a professional designer. Wonderful sweetie.. Good luck U've got a fine hand..


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 7, 2007

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    -sighs-

    Such a feel good read, like a breath of fresh air..I love the background, the form, beautiful content and flow! Thanks for sharing sweet soul, much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


    • pattyann4500
      August 7, 2007
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      Thank you, Timothy. I just learned this form, and I have to admit it's really quite fun. My dear AP sister in Christ is the instructor, and she's fabulous. You should check it out. Hugs, Patricia


  • Candy6
    August 7, 2007
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    Beautiful poem. It looks like a shaped like a tree.


  • FallingTwilight
    August 7, 2007

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    You did a wonderful job on this piece. The imagery is vivid.It's a beautiful piece and the background is lovely.

    FallenPoeticAngel


    • pattyann4500
      August 7, 2007
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      Thank you. I was fortunate to have this beautiful background to make the poem just pop. The background is by my AP granddaughter, Scarlet Ambrosia.


  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 7, 2007

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    Beautiful

    They are so beautiful and this etheree does the butterflies justice. They are "whispering delights purified" like we are because of Christ.

    Great job Sis. These do get addicting!

    Love and hugs


    • pattyann4500
      August 7, 2007
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      The worst part is figuring out that first syllable. Thanks, Professor. I am very proud of my new talent--thanks to you. God bless you.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 7, 2007

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    Wow stunning piece love the background.
    butterflies. Great job

    delila


    • pattyann4500
      August 7, 2007
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      Thank you, Delila. The background was made by my lovely AP granddaughter, Scarlet Ambrosia.

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