I wonder,
I wonder if I wonder enough,
Will I eventually find nothing to wonder about?
Will I have solved all my problems?
My Life? My Friends? My Enemies?
Will I never be able to wonder again,
"Why, God, Why?"
Will I never be able to say again.
"I hate my life"?
Will I have wondered all my problems away?
About Life Friends and Enemies?
Will I have wondered so much, that just to wonder,
Makes me nauseous?
Will I have wondered so much, that to wonder again,
will make me wonder?
I will wonder why I wonder? Why I wonder these things?
And I will laugh at my stupidity,
And all this wondering?
I wonder if I will wonder,
Why I continue to wonder?
I wonder if everyone who hates me out there,
Who laughs, points and stares,
Will they finally stop and wonder,
Maybe I have feelings too?
Maybe they will realize,
that what they do tears me apart?
Maybe, someday, they will notice,
that I come to school with tears on my face?
Maybe they will finally see,
that I do not hate them?
but why, oh why, would they hate me?
So I wonder these things,
and I wonder some more,
and then I ask myself,
Why am I wondering, anyway?
and then...
I wonder...
Author notes
please review!!! It has been a LONG time since I have written poetry, so be nice! but still, I can take it if you really didn't like it.
A contest entry
- With life comes tears and laughter by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended August 8, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Interesting
Wondering is something all people do and try as you might there will always be something to wonder about and always a reason to wonder because sadly wondering does not solve anything it is what you do after you're finished wondering that makes you wonder more. Get it Ya digz?
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Wondering is a part of human nature along with worrying. I myself am very good at both. I like this write very much. My favorite lines are:
Will they finally stop and wonder,
Maybe I have feelings too?
Maybe they will realize,
that what they do tears me apart?
Maybe, someday, they will notice,
that I come to school with tears on my face?
Maybe they will finally see,
that I do not hate them?
but why, oh why, would they hate me?
So I wonder these things,
and I wonder some more,
and then I ask myself,
Why am I wondering, anyway?
and then...
I wonder...
Thank you for your entry Goodluck xxxxxxxxx
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