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Splendor Of Earth (Triolet)

Amazed by the glorious splendor of Earth
filled with beautiful creatures
enticed and entwined since the moment of birth
amazed by the glorious splendor of Earth
joined in wondrous pleasure of mirth
a world in a galaxy of uncomparable features
amazed by the glorious splendor of Earth
filled with beautiful creatures



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  • lindaburns gold member
    February 16, 2008
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    It’s light and happy just like I asked for. Thank you.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    words and form here are great
    this is awesome read
    wonderfully written


  • islekine gold member
    August 11, 2007
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    Very well done.

    Thanks for entering!!
    *PEACE*


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 7, 2007

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    Wonderfully done
    love this you made a wonderful piece here
    Good luck in the contest
    ~
    Delila


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 7, 2007
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    This makes a lovely triolet, thanks for entering it into my contest. lol

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