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Happy Birthday Darlin

 

Happy Birthday Darlin

This is your day to shine

But I really feel I’m fortunate

  

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That this birthday isn’t mine 

I still have some life in me

I don’t want to sound too cruel

But being as old as you are 

 

Makes me sob and drool 

I’m glad that you’re still kicking

And you can see to type a page

Now blow out all those candles 

 

I’m so blessed I’m not your age

Just kidding…

Have a wonderful birthday darlin

 

~

 

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  • T-Dizzle Mcnizzle
    August 24, 2007
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    ha ha ha...loved it! I wrote something similar for my sister a few years ago making fun of her because she is older than I am.


  • Vernal Bloom
    August 15, 2007

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    So I decided to read all birthday poem, my auntie received for her special seventy’s birthday and I found this sweet piece! It was simple but even a simple thing can go into hearts if it rises from the heart and truly your piece did! I think my auntie will feels so younger with all these funny pictures you added to this page.
    Thank you for sharing this with us and I wish you luck in the contest

    ~Vernal Bloom~


  • Partners In Crime
    August 15, 2007
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  • catz Moderators member
    August 8, 2007

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    Gee, thanks... I think I can hardly wait for your birthday to roll around so I can return the ... ahem... 'favor'

    I laughed all the way through this, my friend and the pictures are great And I love the beautiful background!!

    Thank you for such an enjoyable birthday poem

    love and
    Dee


    • FifthDove
      August 8, 2007

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      lol, sorry, I just had to go humorus on this one You know I love ya and I wish you the most wonderful, beautiful birthday ever

      You brighten my life

      Abd I am just a few steps behide ya sista


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 7, 2007
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    lol this was funny xxx cheeky xxx


  • Ephiphany
    August 7, 2007

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    Wow

    I love the imagery in this...great jobe!
    Thanks, much love


  • Huntress silver member
    August 7, 2007

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    Birthdays are starting to be a pain in the butt Good luck in the contest


    • catz Moderators member
      August 8, 2007
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      neener, neener, neener.. you're just ticked because it's not YOUR birthday month. Don't worry, though, it'll get here soon enough... and then watch out

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