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love

The days past by. I don't know what to do or where to go. I want to be in your arms right now. I want to see you so my darkness can fade away once again. I want to see your face. I feel as if something is pulling me away till I can't see you anymore. I wish this darkness that lives apone me will go away letting me see the light and you along with it. my eyes shall probably decive me. my heart is filled with pain, but I'm in your arms that pain fades away... I love you with all of my heart.

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  • Zongetsu
    August 21, 2007

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    I told you you deserve props and well heres the proof you grow richer and richer with every poem you write


  • DogTagz-TheJalapeno
    August 7, 2007

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    ummm in this poem you show you have alot of pain when that poem is gone...
    cool
    hope it gets better



    kayla