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I know I'm Fat

My friends call me Fluffy
But I know I'm fat
They say I have muffins
But They're really my rolls
These cute names don't hide the facts
I know what I am, I know I'm fat
And while I like these nicknames for my fat
I don't deserve that tact
And so I agree
That while I'm pudgy
Atleast the cover up names are funny
But no matter what you call it
I'm still quite fat
And can't rise above it
Despite I have more rolls then a bakery
I have to overcome it
But if anyone was ever truly fat
It's me, cuz I know I'm sure not Flat!

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    hehe,  they say less is more bevy...but 'fat'.. more for your money..and more to hold on to...a great write lolSmile


    • Beverlynohime
      August 8, 2007
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      haha Thanks Peter! More to love? lol
      XD
      At any rate...you should check out my other news ones! XD They're pretty good I read them to my parents and they said they were so accurately great it was amazing. XD haha


  • Danneh
    August 7, 2007

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    Lmfao.

    I'm the same way.

    >< I loved this..

    It's so cute.... ^^

    Though I don't like the little names.. I mean their funny and all.. But I'm like 'Just call it what it is' -z-snap-

    My friends all roll their eyes at it.. but heh.. It's just me..

    -Danneh


    • Beverlynohime
      August 8, 2007
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      hehe thanks XD
      I don't I like the term muffins...hehe it makes me kind of giggle. o.o