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Role Play With Flaed

We were all at a party last night and its in the morning now... John had his first beer and he and Flaed both woke up with a hangover.. We are now at the park.

Kat and John are sitting at the top of the hill as Flaed and Shaun walk up. "Hey you," says Kat to Flaed.John stands up and screams, "Whats up!?" he then stumbles and falls while Kat laughs at him.

Flaed goes to hug Kat, but ends up puking over her shoulder instead. She collapses on top of Kat, exhausted. Shaun watches, bored. He kicks John on his way by and picks Flaed up like a cat. Flaed meows. He manages to get her in a standing position without flashing everyone for once.
"I don't feel so good," Flaed says. She sees John and says, "Hi JayJay." She crawls over to him, and she lays on top of him.Shaun scowls (his normal appearance),  sits down next to Kat, and says, "Hey."

Kat laughs hysterically when Flaed falls on her. "Whats up?" She asks to no one in particular.."Ow!" John screams when Shaun kicks him."Hi Flaed," he replies.

Flaed, still on top of John, hugs him. "So, didya like, sleep by yourself last night??" she asks concerned.

"I hope so," says John as he returns the hug. Kat points her finger, whispers something, and then some coke pops up for all. "You were both so wasted last night," Kat teases John and Flaed as Shaun pouts.

Shaun then smiles, faintly. "Punny humans," he says.
"You poor thing!" Flaed says to John. "I only had a glass of wine or two..." Flaed gets confused "Oh look a buterfly!" she happily states. Shaun snorts.

Kat rolls her eyes and smiles at how typical of a situation this was. She then pulls out her camera and snaps a picture. "Whatchya doin with the camera?" asks John. "I'm saving this for keepsake," replies Kat. "Why?" asks John. "Why not?" Kat says back. Kat then notices Flaed staring at the butterfly. "Go ahead and chase it already!" Kat says laughingly.

Flaed gets up and chases the butterfly. Then she runs over to Kat and sits in her lap, snuggling down for a nap. Shaun walks over to John and picks him up, distastefully. "Neh. Your a disaster"

Kat laughs at Flaed and holds her in her arms. "Hey what are you doing??" she asks Shaun. John just stares wide eyed

Shaun twitches. "You disgust me," he says to John.
(Shaun is vocal, wow he's being friendly!)
Flaed falls asleep.
Shaun sighs and sets John back down.
He looks down over at Flaed. "I'm kinda hungry."

"What do you want to eat?" asks Kat as she strokes Flaed's hair.

Shaun rolls his eyes. "The same thing I always eat." He almost smiles at Flaed (big breakthrough!)Flaed mumbles in her sleep.

Kat points her finger, mumbles something, and then gives him the same thing he always eats: a crap load of dead people from the war with blood still in them for him to drink. "Oh wow," says Kat, "You almost smiled.. that's a first." She looks down at Flaed and sees John asleep too using her legs as a pillow. At this, Kat smiles.

Shaun grumbles something about them being already dead and how thats gross.

Kat laughs and then points her finger to make the dead people disappear. "Well who do you want to eat besides John, Flaed, or me," she asks.

Shaun looks at flaed tenderly. "It can wait," he says.
He sits down next to Kat and starts braiding Flaed's hair

Kat smiles and then looks up at Shaun "You love her don't you?" she asks.

"Love is a strong emotion, but possessiveness is more forward," says Shaun.
Flaed blinks sleepily up at Kat. "He's my protector," she says. Shaun grimaces. "You do have a tendency to need it," he says gruffly, trying not to show emotion.

Kat nods. "I know what you mean," she says to Shaun.. Kat then smiles at Flaed and Shaun and at the remarks they just made.

Shaun scowls at Kat in a you-think-you-know-everything-don't-you kinda way. Flaed sits straight up. "Swimm!!!" She strips off her dress and runs over to a little ducky-puddly-pond-thing. Splishy splash! Shaun sits there, scowling (he could almost remind you of Snape.) with Flaed's dress on top of his head, where she threw it. (Let me restate that for you; SCOWL)

Flaed is now in a black lacy thong and bra combo, soaking wet, in the duck hangout thing.(Yea!)

Kat laughs at Flaed and ignores Shaun.

John strips down to his blue plaid boxers and joins Flaed. "Kat, get your ass in here!" John screams.

"I'm coming I'm coming" Kat strips down to a black and pink striped pantie and bra combo leaving Shaun scowling as always.

"I hope some hobo gets your clothes!" screams Shaun. He gets up and looks around for the police. He shrugs and wades in after Flaed to save her from an angry duck mommy.

Flaed tries to pet the duck babies, but doesn't understand why the mommy's being so mean. She howls and starts crying when she gets bitten. Then, she tackles John trying to get away from them, knocking him over. Splash!

Shaun (drip drip) scowls.

Kat laughs.

"Aghh!" screams John when Flaed knocks him over.

"I'm sorry, I'm sorry!! I'M SORRY!" Flaed panics.

Shaun picks her up. "Shhh!" he screams.

John gets up and laughs. "It's ok, Flaed. Don't worry so much." He goes over and hugs her.

Kat just shakes her head and smiles.

"Ooh.. can we go shopping???? Kat you need new undies," asks Flaedl.

Shaun raises one eyebrow slightly. "So do you, Flaed."

Flaed looks down, "Whats wrong with this??? Is it 'cause it's kinda see through?"

"No, no that's fine," says Shaun nervously (cough cough)

Flaed gets confused. "Well...?"

Shaun hands Flaed to Kat. "Here, you guys have fun." He hands her his credit card and flits off.

"Why doesn't Shaun like my undies?" asks Flaed. She looks at John. "Do you like my undies????" Flaed pouts.

Kat pulls out credit card and some $100s. "Lets go!"

"Yes, Flaed," replies John, "I like your undies."

Flaed's eyes light up. "Cool!" She looks back at John "But, but, Shaun left.. Who'll tell me what to get?" She runs back and grabs John. "Come with us pwease!" (tug tug) "Ph! I need some new thongs! I can't ever find where I put 'em!" She links arms with John and Kat.

Kat laughs, points her finger, and the three are outside of the mall. "Come on,"  she says pulling Flaed, "Victoria's Secret is having a sale!"

John laughs and follows.

"Oh, okay. but I don't know what to get.. And I.. um... Well, I need help getting it on. Shaun always dresses me." She smiles. "Ooh!!! PINK!!!" She dives into a pin of undies, showering the closest people in lacy,see through,and/or silky panties. She pops back up, holding a pink thong contraption, with another pantie on her head and one on her shoulder.

Author notes

characters:

kat- deep, beautiful, strong, independent, been through alot person... long dark brown hair, big brown eyes with long eyelashes, full lucious lips, was born a fairy princess, but turned from her fate long ago.. wears dark alot.. like a back mini skirt striped leggings converse and a tanktop, her dark hair naturally flowing behind her, her wings sticking out.. they are beautiful mainly black with hot pink and purple designs.. shes 19 and can be one of flaed's best friends

John- human.. brown hair blue eyes, more of the skater types but not really preppy or emo.. just somewhere in between i guess.. he can be 18.. doesnt remember a single thing because some one shot him in the head and so we had to do a background check on him so that he could know who he was and such... he is also kats cousin which is why he hangs around kat shaun and flaed cuz he has no where else to go.. great story huh?

shaun- a dark pessamistic vamire.21. black hair longish,dead strait. blue/gray eyes, that flicker black when overcome by emotion,ie when he becomes dangerous. quiet.easily provoked. passionate when he cares. couldnt care less attitude. strong, u know normal vamp stuff. he can flitt, carying a couple people with him. can control minds, if he wanted to.

flaed-a ditsy cute, lost puppydog kinda person.usually about 16 17. long butt length dirty blond hair, strait. blue/green bright eyes. total barbie, in apearance. suppersweet, sugar coated personality. passes out when stressed. healer.
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  • HarvesterOfHearts
    September 7, 2007

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    this has potential to be a great story.but i was lost throughout it. you didn't describe much and it was like i landed right in the middle of this story.

    thanks for your entry though


  • MotherMachineGunn
    September 7, 2007

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    Well here is what I think... The story is vivid, I can easily picture what you're saying and bring myself in the story. However, it is my belief that if you were to spend more time with your characters in the story the reader could better make a connection. It was a little wayward and I had no idea what was going on until I read your notes. Your characters are very defined and well penned in your authors notes, find a way to relay the depth into the story. The grammar is a little off in some spots and in my opinion the story would benefit from a larger range in vocabulary. Again, like I said you did good making your readers visualize what your writing. So kudos for that.
    Thank you for taking the time to enter and best of luck to you in the contest.

    ~MotherMachineGunn~


  • Bleeding On Paper
    August 8, 2007
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    oh *suprised face*o.o


  • torieshawesum
    August 7, 2007
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    good story sis

  • Bleeding On Paper
    August 7, 2007

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    nice its kool i was confused at first but then i was able to catch on to the story....*whistles*....KEEP ON TRUCKIN'!



    oh yeah got you i said it what what you wanna mess? huh punk huh?

    lol im soo kool


  • just a voice
    August 7, 2007

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    This was fucking hilarious. I laughed me ass off at the part where they were talking about eatign the dead people and shaun says it gross casue their alread dead. Does that make me a sick son of a bitch? Oh well I thought it was funny. I'm not sure if you meant for it to be that way or not. I hope so cause if ya didn't I probably just somehow insulted you. Anyways I liked this. Great job.

    • lexie like woah
      August 7, 2007

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      lol me n meh friend flaed have been rollplaying.. i play as kat and john and she plays as shaun and flaed... its funn and that was meant to be funny so its all good lol... we are always adding more so be sure to check up on it every now and then... plus i just described all the characters in the authors notes

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