tomorrow, I'll tell
a tribute to tolerance
today, I'm too tired
why do witches
wind twine with willows?
who knows, what wonders lie west
look - land ho! leap
for leaping, late for
lakes - leer, Lear
hurry home, hannah,
her house has hurt her
her horses are helpless
hopefully hannah can heal them
moping molly mops more, makes
muffins in the morning
more than meat for monday
mushrooms move moping mysteries
each engine ate eight
etruscan eels. Earl
even only ate eleven
What was your first reaction?
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Hood-Winked!
Very clever, very nice and very funny, I really enjoyed the read. Hope you'll enjoy your hoodwinkday.
~Titia~
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Hood-Winked!
Congratulations, dear Poet, on being ambushed by the Poetic Bandits!
I truly hope this mass visitation will bring a smile to your face and a renewed confidence to your work. 
Well, this was indeed some fun to read. I love the alliteration in this (what appears to be) stream-of-consciousness piece, leading your reader all over the place and back again!
Definitely a good party piece tongue-twister to give someone when they've had a skinful!
Well devised and well penned.
All the best!
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My first reaction?
Well...being you are Kevin and own AP, I would have thought you much deeper, but to each his own
! Cute Kevin, I am going to try this once, it looks fun.
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This had me laughing out loud! This was fun too read and brightened up my day. Somedays all we ever need is a little humor..........
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poets who play with words, show a more lively line when it comes time to settle down to weightier matters and even there, the play never really ends.
blessings and best wishes,
~richard
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