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[ stones are solid, but ]

stones are solid, but
weep when the rain is
neverending, such
passion without a
clear goal - my resolve
begins to break

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Just a short lil thing

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  • Nat
    August 7, 2007
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    Such a great and simple poem Kevin. Its true, we cannot chase our dreams and utilize our passion without a light to guide. There is no way we would survive. Keep writing and running this great site!
    "The truest soul knows no age, like a tree of thought watching over."
    -roti


  • astralshepherd gold member
    August 7, 2007

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    brevity offers much, i think. when trying to explain one's soul, its condition - too many words get in the way. Very nice poem, Kevin - maybe take a break from site issues for a moment or two and write more oftener than you do.

    Blessings and best wishes,

    ~richard