He grows like the vine
That twists around her soul
Spirits of the earth and air
Move around his blinded eyes
He is summer
When autumn whispers his name
He is spring
When winter freezes out the wind
That desperately seeks her wings
But she lies frozen in time
And he blooms
When the first summer rose comes to call his name
His name is magical
Mystery surrounds his body
Untouched by human hands
He is summer
He is the maker of dreams
And the taker of hearts
She weeps icicle tears that drip
Souless into the ether
Searching for her seasonal man
He stretches to the sound of summer love
Knowing that he can
Unaware of the beauty that whispers his name
His limbs grow taller as the summer sun bathes
His very soul
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Written September 8th, 2003
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it seems daddy came home in this one aswell.. but in this case.. he's a sugar daddy.. lmfao.. oh my i need a nap.. and mayhaps a nice jacket that ties at the back.. yepp.. its accounting season again.. which means.. inane jabbering from not only comments.. but poems aswell from me..
but just cause its inane jabbering.. doesn't mean it won't be highly educational.. =)
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outstanding work
Gill this is so beautiful,strong and yet romantic at the same time,the imagery is outstanding,a truly moving write,I love the flow of your words....very well penned my friend.
love and many hugs.
Jan xx -
Great
Hello
Beautiful!
Imagery amazing!
Smiles,
Joanie -
" He grows like the vine
That twists around her soul "...
Thought this was a PERFECT description of being in love...
or perhaps the impact a soulmate can have on you as a
whole...
Mmmmm...reads it again...
Does this sum up the " dream " of what a potential partner
might be like ? Or should be like ? If he is reality ,
sounds like a pretty puuurrrrfect fella to me ! And there
ain't many of them about !!
Enjoyed
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LOVELY
thats so COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
AND I LIKE THIS PART
Mystery surrounds his body
Untouched by human hands
He is summer
He is the maker of dreams
And the taker of hearts
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Gill
This is absolutely beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So many breath-takingly beautiful and serene images surrounded my soul, as soft sighs escaped from within my heart, leaving me in a dream state
This is perfect as is to me
Love you,
Karen
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Thankyou everyone for your kind words... always appreciate them and let them sink in
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OMG this is simply beautiful Gill!!
He is summer
He is the maker of dreams
And the taker of hearts
She weeps icicle tears that drip
Souless into the ether
Searching for her seasonal man
Breath taking!!
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UH HUHHHHHHHHHHHHHH yep
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big ole dreamy sigh
Gilly, this is...magical
loved every last single word,
and love you too
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i cant imagine anything more vivid and concise. your imagery seems to be set on 11, thats for sure! the last few poems i have read from you have really been exceptional. im glad to see that SOME of us here NEVER seem to get writers block!! thanks for asking about me and missing me. im doing fine, and glad to be back!
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sublime in its symetry
beautiful is the descriptive soul
and yum is the dream you penn, Gil
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This poem is pure magic in the way it made me feel. The changing od the seasons, something completely intangible, and yet, you captured it here, beautifuly.
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Thankyou to Silversong and Everlyn.. still working on it a bit.. but really appreciate you dropping by.. glad you enjoyed it
~GILL~~xx -
goregous
Great beautiful poem its full of pictures that i can imagin and so deep -
This poem is a myriad of beautiful imagery and tasteful words . . . when I say tasteful, I mean I can actually taste them in my mouth. I loved the theme, the way that the persona had so much power. A wonderful love poem, thank you for sharing.
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