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It came from the ebony woods

Movement in the night,I don't know where,
Admiring glint eyes shine in the dark, from a distance it stares,
I don't know what it wants, it's followed me for days,
Watching me in wonder, "You want me dead!?" I screamed meeting it's gaze,
The woods is a bad place to be when it's this dark,
Through the blackness you swim, like a blood scent driven morbid shark,
I continue to push through the ebony woods, with a will not of my own,
In the distance I hear screams and cracking of bones, assuring me I'm not alone,
I turn around, surrounded by people that resemble my friends,
What happened, where the fuck am I, Damnit I changed again,
Without a choice I'm carried off to the mental hospital, from words so misunderstood,
I try to tell them what happened,but all that came out was"It came from the ebony woods" 

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eh, just another eerie woods poem I slapped together, the end need some work I think

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  • slayenemy909
    August 7, 2007
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    dark vibe

    It had a a panic filled darkness about it.. as it should. not too shabby.