only when I look at my reflection do I see,
the warrior that is ready to fight if ever I am in need.
when I look in your eyes, no fear do I find.
you know the price to pay, if survival is ever at stake.
you would never think twice, if for me you ever had to fight.
many sacrifices you have made, but never once did you complain .
when blood and tears had to be shed you held your ground.
the enemy was at a loss, for no weakness in you could be found.
I don't see how you could be a part of me,
you are nothing like me, your the total opposite.
you have seen death, and shed many tears.
you have protected me through all these years.
I hide you very well, were no one can see.
no one would notice if they just looked at me.
sometimes I wonder if they would run and hide,
if they ever saw what I hide deep inside.
but your a part of me I can't deny , is only because of you
that I am still alive. I can always trust that you will surface
whenever I'm in need, for you will forever be my secret company.
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I liked it. Good luck
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wow great write good luck
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well written and even though they say opposites attact it doesnt matter when they are their for you in guidance and assistance and protectionand above all support. Trusting their being and with their aid in survival of help with guidance we can truly know our angels are with us. I can't imagine my life without mine for he is my world and i admit my day wouldn't be complete if he or I didnt tell each other we loved each other or gave each other needed hugs. many wishes and blessings always for you xxx
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Excellent.
Congrad's on the Gold!!! It is Well deserved!
Joe
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