One small specie, grappling with existence
natural selection's discourse course
from the cradle to the grave
in the void of oblivion
only bones remain
Author notes
Oblivion's Canyon
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~ 5 LINES! by Namita.
300 points, ended August 8, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrats on the gold, this deserved it! I love poems that say so much in so few words.


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Amazing penning! Great job and wondeful take on the prompt. Thanxx for sharing. Good luck.
Candy
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Excellent take on the prompt.. love the lines...
All the best!




