A seed you are
that'll be longing
for things of sorts
that only time can prevail.
Innocence brush-
into your skin-
and your inside.
Your delicate
silk soft,
milk bath skin
carries the love
created by two souls.
In your eyes,
attached bliss,
emanates truthfulness-
only a child bears.
Your smile warms,
the heart, the soul,
of everyone.
In a swift-
moving manner,
it breathes happiness.
Your cry,
gives the tension-
that'll awaken
the senses
and proves the nature
that we can love
be love, and know
love unconditionally.
I am waiting
for your tears to flow
In your rosy cheeks.
I realize that It'll take
two weeks for tears
to appear in a child.
Author notes
Written August 7, 2007
A contest entry
- letter to a baby by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended August 11, 2007, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is really a wonderful poem; I loved this.
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beautiful imagery and feel to this piece.
"I realize that It'll take
two weeks for tears
to appear in a child."
that ending was so unique and unexpected.
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