Intertwined in a cosmic embrace,
we dance a waltz of infinite steps.
Every step is a change in direction,
leaving us breathless with anticipation.
Whipping about the floor of life,
trusting you with the lead of the dance,
I follow, sure in your control.
Take me now, down the dance floor,
swing me into the variety of choices.
I am your willing partner, now and forever,
willing to give you the support needed
to complete the dance before us.
Dance with me! Teach me to live!
And for eternity will I follow your lead!
©2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: Picture Inspired...THE DANCERS by PoorPeter
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2363362
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired...THE DANCERS by Pete Greenslade.
700 points, ended August 15, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited.
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I dont know much about dancing but you certainly seemed to capture the essence of it. This is purely magical and I am very pleased to have read it. I think my favorite lines were Intertwined in a cosmic embrace, and Take me now, down the dance floor. They reminded me of the love I have for Jesus. Excellant write and God bless!
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Well, it is not really about dancing, but rather the dance of life.
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entrancing...portraying the fire and romance of latin dance..well done and best of luck in the contest
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Thank you, although it is not actually about a dance. I do appreciate the comment.
rous
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