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Peeking




crystal mirrors morph
portals vacuum and erupt:
  hooves, flaps and splashes silence,
stream through to the unknown siren
following intuitive compasses

fibre periscopes witness premonitions
submerge again into underwater mists
where trapped souls eavesdrop under threats

barriers recreate once again
on war zones





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Prompt: http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2363/312.jpg?1186486079

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  • JoyfulWriter
    August 7, 2007

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    Awesome take on this image! Loved the imagery and beauty in this...thanks for entering my contest...good luck..smiles, Terry


    • between slices
      August 8, 2007
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      thanks loads! i'm glad you liked it and i much appreciate the HM! thank you!

      bless ya!