I am lost
Can you help me?
I am tossed
Can you not see?
By the winds of depression
I am thrown into obsession
Lying in the darkness
Dreaming of the madness
That will not disappear
Depression is my one true fear
A contest entry
- Perfect 10! (Part 2) by second-born.
1000 points, ended August 17, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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“By the winds of depression
I am thrown into obsession
Lying in the darkness
Dreaming of the madness”…these are beautiful lines…there’s a natural flow between them…and you did not force your rhymes…and it is true that to some people, depression is a fear…because it hinders them to feel the love around them…
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stirs emotion
I like this poem with its feeling of being hopeless. The rhyme is great. It gives food for thought. Well done.
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I can really relate to this write at the moment...beautifully penned, the emotions in this piece are clear and raw. Keep up the awesome work and good luck in the contest!
Madison xoxo
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