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To Be Written

Nothing, there is nothing to be said
What I have thought can never be read.
So still I sit with pen in hand
Wondering, wondering, about what never began.

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something i radomly wrote nothing special really... it sounds good at the moment but i'm half asleep,lol.

Blah, I felt like posting something. no specifics.

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  • superl337sauce
    September 5, 2008
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    Writer's block - I know how you feel.

    Don't worry; it really did sound good.

    Try this revised version to bring out the inherent rhythm bounce:

    Nothing, nothing,
    there's nothing to be said.
    What I have thought,
    can never be read.
    So still I sit,
    with pen in hand,
    Wondering, wondering,
    of what never began.

    All centered, of course...