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The Promise Of Light

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When varied thoughts crowd a mind
Like scattered colors on a sky, so mild,
Seeking a treasure, hard to find
Walking away from a world, that's wild.

Peigions in white, in silence they stay
Unsaid words, held with care,
Awaiting a dawn, promises along the way,
When the sun and moon, take off somewhere.

It is the way of the world, that goes
Spreading shades on a paper white,
Its wide and open, no doors to close
And with the night comes the promise of light!                             

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 22, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful write. I enjoyed the read very much. Did you by any chance mean 'Pigeons'? Still, a wonderful piece. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • capricornpoet
    August 7, 2007

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    inspiring

    Light symphony of life, said in a gentle way as a breeze of night..dreamy and refreshing prose..
    inspires a new breath of day.